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The introduction of a sugar tax could be beneficial because it will encourage the citizens to consume less sugar, a cause of diseases like diabetes and obesity. When they become healthier, the government may slash its budget on public health and medicine and reallocate the resources to some other areas such as elimination of poverty and economic development.
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Is the administrative cost low enough to justify the introduction of such a tax?
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Exercise
Rewrite the following run-on sentence.
I studied hard, I failed the exam.
Answers
Revised: Although I studied hard, I failed the exam.
I studied hard but I failed the exam.
I studied hard; I failed the exam.
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