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From Steve Jobs, we can notice that being passionate to one's goal is essential to one's success. A person's passion will drive him or her to make improvements.

When Apple first produced iPod, it enjoyed an instantaneous success. Yet, rather than stopping, Jobs went on producing other coveted products, which revolutionized subsequent models of personal computers, phones, tablets, etc.

Besides, passion is probably the major ingredient that encourages a person to persist in his or her dream. Without passion, a person may easily give up when facing setbacks or failures. After Jobs was fired by Apple in the 1980s, instead of quitting the IT industry, he went on starting another new firm, which eventually led him back to Apple many years later.

Without passion, it is doubtful that a person can attain perfection and persevere for his or her goals.

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Exercise

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Enhancing our mental strength is less formidable than we once imagined. According to Morin, we can, gradually but surely, strengthen our mental stamina by means of certain regular mental exercises such as positive self-talking, practicing tolerance of discomfort, performing daily reflections, etc. Hard work and commitment are needed; we can literally train our mind just like our body.

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