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One reason why Pokˆmmon Go has become so popular among the adults probably lies with its ability to evoke nostalgic memories from many of its players. Indeed, these days we can easily see groups of youngsters and teenage gamers appear everywhere, swarming around different spots and buildings just to catch various "pokˆmmons".

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Another reason why Pokˆmmon Go is such a success is probably related to its cute figures or characters. To take an example, the character Snorlax is so lovely that it makes me continue playing the game. Furthermore, I love Snorlax so much that I have bought lots of merchandizes that are related to this character.

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Exercise

Read the following statement and identify vague and unclear words which need further elaboration.

To thrive academically, you need more than having a high IQ. Having a proper study environment is equally important. How can you focus on your textbooks when the study environment is overly noisy; even if you can get yourself focus amid a noisy environment, do you think you can remember the study materials you have just read?

Answer

Words like "a proper study environment", "overly noisy", and 'a noisy environment" are unclear, which need further elaboration.

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