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Topic: Nowadays, it is not uncommon for students in some western countries to take a gap year before entering colleges or universities. Write an article for your school magazine saying whether you support the idea of a gap year or not.

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Introduction

Thesis statement: I'm in support of the idea of taking a gap year.¡]³o¬O½×ÂI¡^

Body paragraph 1

Topic sentence: Taking a gap year is beneficial personally.

¡@¡@Support: (i) Build self-confidence and independence;

¡@¡@(ii) Lower the chance of academic burnout;

¡@¡@(iii) Find one's passion.

Body paragraph 2

Topic sentence: Taking a gap year is also advantageous to one's studies.

¡@Support: (i) Gain a greater understanding of your subsequent studies;

¡@¡@(ii)Improve chances of college acceptance;

¡@¡@ (iii) May earn money for subsequent studies.

Body paragraph 3

Topic sentence: Finally, taking a gap year helps professional job development.

Support:(i) Work experience amid the gap year helps students better understand the work world.

¡@¡@(ii)Experiences gained in the gap year help build a person's resume.

¡@¡@(iii)May learn skills that are useful to a person seeking jobs.

Conclusion

Final thought: The effective use of a gap year depends on students' careful planning.

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Practice

In the following outline, the major ideas and supporting details are all mixed together. Re-organize them.

Thesis statement: My company has some inherent problems that lead to low morale among colleagues.

Poor management

a. _____________

Low technology

1. _____________

Colleagues

2. _____________

Unwilling to work overtime

b. _____________

Form cliques

1. _____________

Managers

2. _____________

Office environment

c. _____________

Not enough space

1. _____________

Comparatively low pay

2. _____________

Answers

a. Managers

1. Form cliques

2. Poor management

b. Colleagues

1. Comparatively low pay

2. Unwilling to work overtime

c. Office environment

1. Low technology

2. Not enough space

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