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Although climbing Mount Everest may appear to be a far-fetched dream, it is not something that is totally impossible. Indeed, even a layperson could attempt it in two to three years, if he or she climbs frequently and if he or she is sufficiently dedicated. Thus, what is the best way to get prepared for the challenge? To begin with, you should take a course in rock climbing. Moreover, you should practice rock climbing. Then, you should get to know aid climbing. Importantly, aid climbing will introduce you to various techniques needed in climbing rocks. Furthermore, you should practice ice climbing. Finally, you should prepare yourself psychologically for the big challenge.

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Thus, What is the best way to get prepared for the challenge¡HTo begin with, you should take a course in rock climbing and moreover, you should practice it. Once you know rock climbing sufficiently well, Then, you should get to know aid climbing. Importantly, aid climbing, which will introduce you to various techniques needed in climbing rocks. Then, you should practice ice climbing. Finally, you should and prepare yourself psychologically for the big challenge.

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